i think that you really brought your story of a typical day in the life of a working woman across. I liked how you split the film into 3 different parts with the keyboard shot but I kind of wished you would have focussed it more onto the girl's face in different situations rather than what she's doing so the audience gets more an idea of her feelings and thoughts. I think that would have made the film more interessting. but I still think that you made a good choice of shots and overall its a nice little piece of work :)