under ground / 1:52
by montyfendt, 5 years, 3 months ago
Description
a tribute to a great idea... stray cinema rocks.
by montague for strayfilms
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Comments
I really dig this one. Taking clips and imagery from the previous films and condesing it into a new, ciclical story about... well to me it talks about dreams a bit. It reminds me of dreaming about work. That horror upon horrors when you realise that one repetetive task dominates your entire existance. Her commute looks pretty big through all the films and i'm sure that to her it would seem that's all she does is ride the trains. Every day... over and over... the same things... until you're doing it in your sleep.
Or at least, that's what it says to me.
Great use of music with your edit.
-T
Alright Mr. Monty I have waited until I had the proper time to give this piece a piece of mind. I know that pun is ridiculous but really stay with me. First the obvious comment about music is a must, I'll be it a cliche beginning on my part I still must say that the music suits the narritive and gives a much needed or in this case wanted sleakness to the depths of whatever city the heroine is traversing. Second, I like that you begin and end with either documentation, description, or simpy creation referenced by the notebook and give choice to the viewer to decide based upon his or her biases which it is to them. I also like that you wait to title the piece until after this sequence is established. Finally I enjoy that all though there in the narritive is no necessary point of climax the piece itself becomes one, as in only after watching the work and thinking about the moment it put me in with her do I then want to see the work again to thus be in that moment, kudos I am a fan of your work and hope to see more soon.
By motuv, 5 years, 2 months ago
bacilluscamillus
By bacille, 5 years, 2 months ago
waiting for the sequel
By jazzminetea, 5 years, 2 months ago
alleycat cool skinfizz
By noeme, 5 years, 2 months ago
smooth&sensuous
By jazzminetea, 5 years, 2 months ago
just dreamlike, like a novel by siri hustvedt
By lucille, 5 years, 2 months ago
I get all my quotes from the cookie time book
By martyn.pepperell, 5 years, 2 months ago
this is very good video and music is awesome
By dd240sx, 5 years, 3 months ago

By TIMOTUV, 5 years, 1 month ago