Thank you Very Much Tabea for your comments i Apreciate the critics and i fell well about this Work, was Interesting use the material to create a Story and try to abtain the Attention of the People on this short film.
Have a Nice Day.

I like the idea that you used subtitles even that you might used a bit too many but I still think that cos of using the subtitles the audience more understands your idea of the film than interpreting their own story in it which isn't a bad thing I guess that's what this project is about. but I like how this time I see your idea of this short story. I also really liked how you choosed the shots with different angles which made it even more interessting watching. all summed up i think you've done really beautifull work. :)

Hi Bill clay and Shimmer.... Nice To Meet you..

thanks for your comments and Critics. You Have Rigth Bill Mi First Language is not english, Im From Guadalajara, Mexico and i Know can commit Mistakes or not use well some Gramma Rules or consistance of the Language. I agree whith You and Shimmer maybe i put many Subtitles and for you and the People espeak english is not necesary to much. I apreciate your comments and i feel Weel for this work about you Liked mi propouse and the use of your Material. Any other Comment at your service thanks again and Have a nice Day.

Nice work. I like the feeling of unease, which you've sustained very well without "bending" the footage out of shape. You've found your own story within the footage admirably. Bravo!

I think I agree about maybe a few too many subtitles - these aren't needed every step of the way. Is English your first language? Sorry if this sounds like a patronising question - I'm just interested in your choice to use so much onscreen English.

I think this is one of the strongest entries I've seen and I'd love for you to do an edit without the copyrighted music so we could see how your film does in the contest.

Haha, I love the scream at the end of this one, it left me with the same sinister feeling as the trailer for creep did (though that probably has something to do with the London underground footage). From what I have seen of the other film edits, this one is successful in generating quite a different mood. The sound track works really well, perhaps a few too many subtitles…yeah cool I like it.

I Like very Much tha Way and the Idea for a Nigthmare Teme. Images Was very beuty and atmosfere has the facility to make a paranoic Story. Thanks for the oportunity to participate on your competition y think this type of competitions are original an great oportunity to make Challenge for the Independent Filmmakers