Hell Yes! nice mood, nice music, and most of all you don't fit the narritive journey stereotype, it isn't something that goes from a to b to c and when you add them togethor you get some end all summary, it's a moment in time, a wednesday morning when she has to go to work and I really think you did well to give it that early morning feel, or maybe it's because I just woke up- eh I like this one.

Yes!
We've reached the tipping point!!!

awesome, submission number 2.

and you used music by stray theories! good choice.