Vision is the art of seeing the invisible!

Thank you for your comment, I really do appreciate it. Actually that quick heel shot at the end was a mistake. It was supposed to be black, an then cut to her hanging up the phone. But somehow, at some point a clip had moved a couple seconds in the timeline revealing that shot. By the time I had noticed it, it was too late...

This could have easily been two very distinct things. 1- a shitty music video of another godawful up and comming folk singer or 2- a really bad rendition of a dream sequence that ends a nonconfrontationally as it began and travels nowhere, but alas I think you actually may have managed to find the little niche between the two polar evils and came out a good. You don't use the what will come to be my contant critisizm: the her alone in the middle of a common area pretending to be a dolphin sequence, instead you stuck with the shot of her standing there and then cashed in your chips which I like, you also went quickly through the last few shots a little too quickly by this i only mean to say that the repeat heel shot was a bit too quick but you made up for it with the last shot, i like the piece but i do think it's missing something- good luck in the future